Let’s improve our English and make a story

Let’s improve our English and make a story, each one should write tow or three sentences.

I start:

After a long hard thought Ms XXXXX decided to immigrate to Canada, he wanted to change his life ….


Dear Erabiliste go on

He wanted to fulfill his dream: to see his son, who is still a baby now, be a talented doctor in the future , able to cure sever disease such as cancer ,..

It was a very difficult decision to make; he hesitated more than once before submitting a permanent resident visa application,

he still wainting for a visa 5 mounts but now all this stress time will be forgeted...

After a long hard thought Ms XXXXX decided to immigrate to Canada, he wanted to change his life, He wanted to fulfill his dream: to see his son, who is still a baby now, be a talented doctor in the future , able to cure sever disease such as cancer, It was a very difficult decision to make; he hesitated more than once before submitting a permanent resident visa application.....

GO ON

MsXXXX decided to continue his adventure to show that he is determinate to make the challenge, he also enrolled in a super Forum named erablatlas to have more informations, read some feedback written by erabliste, which can help him on his decision.....

Then find Erabilists helping each other and joking, suddenly he thought about leaving his motherland and young playing area and felt a sorrow begin to stop him.

There was a luck of information about immigration to this lovely country , no one of his family or friends has tried this destination before, so it was very hard for him to get a clear idea about his project in the future and even if he will be able to fill the application by himself or not.

After a long hard thought Ms XXXXX decided to immigrate to Canada, he wanted to change his life, He wanted to fulfill his dream: to see his son, who is still a baby now, be a talented doctor in the future , able to cure sever disease such as cancer, It was a very difficult decision to make; he hesitated more than once before submitting a permanent resident visa application..... MsXXXX decided to continue his adventure to show that he is determinate to make the challenge, he also enrolled in a super Forum named erablatlas to have more informations, read some feedback written by erabliste, which can help him on his decision..... Then find Erabilists helping each other and joking, suddenly he thought about leaving his motherland and young playing area and felt a sorrow begin to stop him. There was a luck of information about immigration to this lovely country , no one of his family or friends has tried this destination before, so it was very hard for him to get a clear idea about his project in the future and even if he will be able to fill the application by himself or not.
After reading some answers written by erablatlas, he decided to fill the application by himself in order to save money that he will need when moving to Canada….it was a very difficult exercise to collect a lot of documents, and a fastidious task to fill the applications, but he was very enthusiastic and determinate ……

When he finished collecting all the documents demanded, he sent them. He was sure that he has to wait several months before he can receive the invitation to an interview so he continued to lead his life as before. Every day he wake up in the morning, does his prayer , takes his breakfast and run out hopping to find a taxi which may take him to his work .

Same position, same behaviour, same mentality maybe in Canada, it will be different, maybe he will
enjoy his life there, he will find what he was looking for a long time. When he thinks very deeply,
he sometimes has some unanswered questions:
-Is'it the right decision?
-Is my family going to be happy there?
-What about my work? Giving up after X years, is’it not a big defy?
-Could I be able to survive there? to have enough money for all my
Charges, such electricity, heater, internet…..?
- Once I get my Visa, will be possible for me to go away leaving my family, my soothe, my place,
my car, my garden……….?

XXXX has spent more than nine years working with his current employer without noticing how quick that period passed ... since he applied for the canadian permenent residency, he has fixed new goals for him, his son KKKK who is still a baby as well as his beloved wife! thinking about all these and that the phone rang !

Awing to this combination of lot off thing in his mind and maybe he will be uprooted from his culture and origins, he decided to call himself; Konta Kenté.
One good mooring Konta Kenté went to work as usually, started his computer, logged to his e-mail web application then find a good news!

It was an invitation for the great interview. He was jumping out of happiness while announcing the news to his dear wife.
The day of the interview came; he took his wife and travelled to Rabat by train. It was a nice day but his heart beats harder as far as the hotel Hilton became nearer, where the event should take place.
In the reception room he found three persons who were silenced as if it were the Day of Judgment. They disappeared one by one …..
When he was called to enter he was unable to remember a word of what he had been learning by heart several months a go. The door opened and the nice smile of the beautiful lady who was waiting for them dissipated his entire scare.
MR and Mrs. XXXX were able to respond to all questions. At the end, it was announced ‘you’re accepted’. Mr. XXXX was unable to believe his eyes when he was given the CSQ to sign. They leaved the hotel and planned to organize a small ceremony to celebrate the happy event.

After a long hard thought Ms XXXXX decided to immigrate to Canada, he wanted to change his life, He wanted to fulfill his dream: to see his son, who is still a baby now, be a talented doctor in the future , able to cure sever disease such as cancer, It was a very difficult decision to make; he hesitated more than once before submitting a permanent resident visa application..... MsXXXX decided to continue his adventure to show that he is determinate to make the challenge, he also enrolled in a super Forum named erablatlas to have more informations, read some feedback written by erabliste, which can help him on his decision..... Then find Erabilists helping each other and joking, suddenly he thought about leaving his motherland and young playing area and felt a sorrow begin to stop him. There was a luck of information about immigration to this lovely country , no one of his family or friends has tried this destination before, so it was very hard for him to get a clear idea about his project in the future and even if he will be able to fill the application by himself or not.
After reading some answers written by erablatlas, he decided to fill the application by himself in order to save money that he will need when moving to Canada….it was a very difficult exercise to collect a lot of documents, and a fastidious task to fill the applications, but he was very enthusiastic and determinate ……When he finished collecting all the documents demanded, he sent them. He was sure that he has to wait several months before he can receive the invitation to an interview so he continued to lead his life as before. Every day he wake up in the morning, does his prayer , takes his breakfast and run out hopping to find a taxi which may take him to his work .
Same position, same behaviour, same mentality maybe in Canada, it will be different, maybe he will
enjoy his life there, he will find what he was looking for a long time. When he thinks very deeply,
he sometimes has some unanswered questions:
-Is'it the right decision?
-Is my family going to be happy there?
-What about my work? Giving up after X years, is’it not a big defy?
-Could I be able to survive there? to have enough money for all my
Charges, such electricity, heater, internet…..?
- Once I get my Visa, will be possible for me to go away leaving my family, my soothe, my place,
my car, my garden……….?XXXX has spent more than nine years working with his current employer without noticing how quick that period passed ... since he applied for the canadian permenent residency, he has fixed new goals for him, his son KKKK who is still a baby as well as his beloved wife! thinking about all these and that the phone rang !
Awing to this combination of loft off thing in his mind and maybe he will be uprooted from his culture and origins, he decided to call himself; Konta Kenté.
One good mooring Konta Kenté went to work as usually, started his computer, logged to his e-mail web application then find a good news! It was an invitation for the great interview. He was jumping out of happiness while announcing the news to his dear wife.
The day of the interview came; he took his wife and travelled to Rabat by train. It was a nice day but his heart beats harder as far as the hotel Hilton became nearer, where the event should take place.
In the reception room he found three persons who were silenced as if it were the Day of Judgment. They disappeared one by one …..
When he was called to enter he was unable to remember a word of what he had been learning by heart several months a go. The door opened and the nice smile of the beautiful lady who was waiting for them dissipated his entire scare.
MR and Mrs. XXXX were able to respond to all questions. At the end, it was announced ‘you’re accepted’. Mr. XXXX was unable to believe his eyes when he was given the CSQ to sign. They leaved the hotel and planned to organize a small ceremony to celebrate the happy event.



Maybe we should have Episode for this generous man? We also would like all Anglophone erablatlas participate, it’s a kind of summary , experience, think loudly………..thanks to mos1977 for the idea

nouha a écrit:Maybe we should have Episode for this generous man? We also would like all Anglophone erablatlas participate, it’s a kind of summary , experience, think loudly………..thanks to mos1977 for the idea

Don’t forget lady, there is a Québec immigrant among you!

After a long hard thought Ms XXXXX decided to immigrate to Canada, he wanted to change his life, He wanted to fulfill his dream: to see his son, who is still a baby now, be a talented doctor in the future , able to cure sever disease such as cancer, It was a very difficult decision to make; he hesitated more than once before submitting a permanent resident visa application..... MsXXXX decided to continue his adventure to show that he is determinate to make the challenge, he also enrolled in a super Forum named erablatlas to have more informations, read some feedback written by erabliste, which can help him on his decision..... Then find Erabilists helping each other and joking, suddenly he thought about leaving his motherland and young playing area and felt a sorrow begin to stop him. There was a luck of information about immigration to this lovely country , no one of his family or friends has tried this destination before, so it was very hard for him to get a clear idea about his project in the future and even if he will be able to fill the application by himself or not.
After reading some answers written by erablatlas, he decided to fill the application by himself in order to save money that he will need when moving to Canada….it was a very difficult exercise to collect a lot of documents, and a fastidious task to fill the applications, but he was very enthusiastic and determinate ……When he finished collecting all the documents demanded, he sent them. He was sure that he has to wait several months before he can receive the invitation to an interview so he continued to lead his life as before. Every day he wake up in the morning, does his prayer , takes his breakfast and run out hopping to find a taxi which may take him to his work .
Same position, same behaviour, same mentality maybe in Canada, it will be different, maybe he will
enjoy his life there, he will find what he was looking for a long time. When he thinks very deeply,
he sometimes has some unanswered questions:
-Is'it the right decision?
-Is my family going to be happy there?
-What about my work? Giving up after X years, is’it not a big defy?
-Could I be able to survive there? to have enough money for all my
Charges, such electricity, heater, internet…..?
- Once I get my Visa, will be possible for me to go away leaving my family, my soothe, my place,
my car, my garden……….?XXXX has spent more than nine years working with his current employer without noticing how quick that period passed ... since he applied for the canadian permenent residency, he has fixed new goals for him, his son KKKK who is still a baby as well as his beloved wife! thinking about all these and that the phone rang !
Awing to this combination of loft off thing in his mind and maybe he will be uprooted from his culture and origins, he decided to call himself; Konta Kenté.
One good mooring Konta Kenté went to work as usually, started his computer, logged to his e-mail web application then find a good news! It was an invitation for the great interview. He was jumping out of happiness while announcing the news to his dear wife.
The day of the interview came; he took his wife and travelled to Rabat by train. It was a nice day but his heart beats harder as far as the hotel Hilton became nearer, where the event should take place.
In the reception room he found three persons who were silenced as if it were the Day of Judgment. They disappeared one by one …..
When he was called to enter he was unable to remember a word of what he had been learning by heart several months a go. The door opened and the nice smile of the beautiful lady who was waiting for them dissipated his entire scare.
MR and Mrs. XXXX were able to respond to all questions. At the end, it was announced ‘you’re accepted’. Mr. XXXX was unable to believe his eyes when he was given the CSQ to sign. They leaved the hotel and planned to organize a small ceremony to celebrate the happy event.

Waiting for something to happen is a very stressful situation, but this day Mr XXXX ,even if he was waiting more than 30 months to get his CSQ, he was so happy that he felt that the time pass very quickly…..

Merzagui:Don’t forget lady, there is a Québec immigrant among you!

A pleasure to know that francophone erableatlas contribute on this link so carry on together for the best
What about discuss Mrs. XX situation, is he a patient person? Is he going to make it? What will be the best for him?is he a responsible immigrant? Can he accept any position to start his carrier?

In this evening, most of the guests were present. Some of them were members of the Erableatlas association; They seized this opportunity to talk about the Canadian procedure of immigration; its advantages and disadvantages. Mrxxx narrated how he succeded the interview with his wife. Every body seems happy except his parents who hided their worry helplessly : they new that the absence of their son and his little family ,especially the new baby, will surely be very hard to tolerate but they could not whisper a word for it’s their son’s decision and they should respect it .

As soon as Mr.XXX reached home, she realised that he must write a short rapport about this interview and publish it in Moroccan community’s forum interested in immigration to Canada,this forum is called ErableAtlass , he was so happy to share his own experience with Erablists, all that happened in this day, and especially to inform future ones about what sort of questions has been asked.

smail this forum is called ErableAtlass

Pay attention samil, I think that Mr XX has already enrolled in erablatlas forum, he know about it

yes but the reader of the story perhaps does not know about this forum . this is why Mr SMAIL introduced it in this way . Do you agree with me?

After a long hard thought Ms XXXXX decided to immigrate to Canada, he wanted to change his life, He wanted to fulfill his dream: to see his son, who is still a baby now, be a talented doctor in the future , able to cure sever disease such as cancer, It was a very difficult decision to make; he hesitated more than once before submitting a permanent resident visa application..... MsXXXX decided to continue his adventure to show that he is determinate to make the challenge, he also enrolled in a super Forum named erablatlas to have more informations, read some feedback written by erabliste, which can help him on his decision..... Then find Erabilists helping each other and joking, suddenly he thought about leaving his motherland and young playing area and felt a sorrow begin to stop him. There was a luck of information about immigration to this lovely country , no one of his family or friends has tried this destination before, so it was very hard for him to get a clear idea about his project in the future and even if he will be able to fill the application by himself or not.
After reading some answers written by erablatlas, he decided to fill the application by himself in order to save money that he will need when moving to Canada….it was a very difficult exercise to collect a lot of documents, and a fastidious task to fill the applications, but he was very enthusiastic and determinate ……When he finished collecting all the documents demanded, he sent them. He was sure that he has to wait several months before he can receive the invitation to an interview so he continued to lead his life as before. Every day he wake up in the morning, does his prayer , takes his breakfast and run out hopping to find a taxi which may take him to his work .
Same position, same behaviour, same mentality maybe in Canada, it will be different, maybe he will
enjoy his life there, he will find what he was looking for a long time. When he thinks very deeply,
he sometimes has some unanswered questions:
-Is'it the right decision?
-Is my family going to be happy there?
-What about my work? Giving up after X years, is’it not a big defy?
-Could I be able to survive there? to have enough money for all my
Charges, such electricity, heater, internet…..?
- Once I get my Visa, will be possible for me to go away leaving my family, my soothe, my place,
my car, my garden……….?XXXX has spent more than nine years working with his current employer without noticing how quick that period passed ... since he applied for the canadian permenent residency, he has fixed new goals for him, his son KKKK who is still a baby as well as his beloved wife! thinking about all these and that the phone rang !
Awing to this combination of loft off thing in his mind and maybe he will be uprooted from his culture and origins, he decided to call himself; Konta Kenté.
One good mooring Konta Kenté went to work as usually, started his computer, logged to his e-mail web application then find a good news! It was an invitation for the great interview. He was jumping out of happiness while announcing the news to his dear wife.
The day of the interview came; he took his wife and travelled to Rabat by train. It was a nice day but his heart beats harder as far as the hotel Hilton became nearer, where the event should take place.
In the reception room he found three persons who were silenced as if it were the Day of Judgment. They disappeared one by one …..
When he was called to enter he was unable to remember a word of what he had been learning by heart several months a go. The door opened and the nice smile of the beautiful lady who was waiting for them dissipated his entire scare.
MR and Mrs. XXXX were able to respond to all questions. At the end, it was announced ‘you’re accepted’. Mr. XXXX was unable to believe his eyes when he was given the CSQ to sign. They leaved the hotel and planned to organize a small ceremony to celebrate the happy event.

Waiting for something to happen is a very stressful situation, but this day Mr XXXX ,even if he was waiting more than 30 months to get his CSQ, he was so happy that he felt that the time pass very quickly…..

As soon as Mr.XXX reached home, she realised that he must write a short rapport about this interview and publish it in Moroccan community’s forum interested in immigration to Canada,this forum is called ErableAtlass , he was so happy to share his own experience with Erablists, all that happened in this day, and especially to inform future ones about what sort of questions has been asked.

In this evening, most of the guests were present. Some of them were members of the Erableatlas association; They seized this opportunity to talk about the Canadian procedure of immigration; its advantages and disadvantages. Mrxxx narrated how he succeded the interview with his wife. Every body seems happy except his parents who hided their worry helplessly : they new that the absence of their son and his little family ,especially the new baby, will surely be very hard to tolerate but they could not whisper a word for it’s their son’s decision and they should respect it .

I though that Mr. X has just discovered erableatlas forum,sorry if I miss understood.

Hi everybody excuse my bad English, if there is any mistakes don't hesitate to correct them (rah neglisa ma bini o binha ghir al khaier o al ihssan,thank's brother mos1977 for the idea,good remark sister nouha,tkanks sghir very very good remark as well.

seghir a écrit:In this evening, most of the guests were present. Some of them were members of the Erableatlas association; They seized this opportunity to talk about the Canadian procedure of immigration; its advantages and disadvantages. Mrxxx narrated how he succeded the interview with his wife. Every body seems happy except his parents who hided their worry helplessly : they new that the absence of their son and his little family ,especially the new baby, will surely be very hard to tolerate but they could not whisper a word for it’s their son’s decision and they should respect it .

Iwa lalla sghir,dans 30 mois d'attente (rah walla rajel)!!!??? i'm just kidding my sister seghir - ,thanks for your participation.