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Message par newfinder 23/02/08, 04:11 am

salam 3alikom .
hello everybody ,my nickname is newfinder am living in Toronto . Toronto is a big city in Canada .It is a capital of ontario.It is located on the northern shore of lake Ontario .I am happy to use this site to share informations and experiences. All questions are welcoming .I have one suggesstion ,that sometimes to write informations about life in Torronto and to discuss about it
like this one that i checked from news:


TWO KIDS NOW TAKEN INTO CARE
Two young children are now in the care of the Children's Aid Society after their parents were charged with abanding their eight -month-old -child,police say.A baby boy was found crying in the snow,outside a townhouse complexe in North York Monday night .
A resident of one of townhouses found the baby at around 7:30 p.m.Police said the baby wasn't left in the cold for a long time and is in good condition.It was reported the child's parents were arguing when they left him unattended.The baby's mother and father both in their 20 's ,are charged with abondoning a child and failing to applied the necessary supplies,said Const.Wendy Drummond.
The infant and the couple's six -year-old child are now in the care of the C.A.S.
N.B: -const thats mean :constable :police.
-C.A.S : Children's Aid Society : It is kind of association that helps children to get the necessary supplies thats mean
food .logement .clouths and other thinks....
- North York : area in Toronto.

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Message par kabi 23/02/08, 04:32 am

Hi newfinder,
First of all you are welcome.
It's kindful to think about helping people, we really appreciate that, morover that people are much interested about this city.

Maybe just one or two suggestions:

In the part of the forum called "immigration au reste du canada", there is a POST-IT made specifically for Toronto , maybe if you don't mind to forward your message to this part it will be better.

People will be more focused when all informations concerning the same subject are at the same place.

The other suggestion is: it seems more appreciable to have information about the daily life of immigrant, like you or other persons who are living there rather than to talk about somethimg choosed in newspaper..

I'm pretty sure that will give much punch in the real life in toronto.

Thank you again for choosing to share with us such matters.

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Message par newfinder 23/02/08, 06:36 pm

Firstly thank you Kabi for your response and for your suggestions .
About your suggestions ,i appreciate that .
By choosing to write this kind of articles from news paper ,i m looking to get people who are reading it informations about how Canadians think about such as problems .
For example the article of yesterday was about how the law in Canada charge people who don't take care about there children .
By this kind of articles members could know some informations about Canada
There is a big deference between Canada and our lovely Morocco . Such us the law .
Thats all for today i hope that some of the readers will appreciate that .

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Message par lion69 23/02/08, 09:17 pm

salam
are you welcom newfinder in this forum
Ithink your initiative is very impresive an i have appreciated a lot .
yes it's true.
the goal of this espace ist to chare the informations; ;the knowledges and the experiences . all this I beleive that wil serve our freind in their immigration process.

we all are a great family and we have built a great link so i hope in the futur that forum wil expand and to attract another freind who is living in canada anglofone

about information of abanding of child
this phenomena is became normal and you can find it across the word i think it's due on a lot of causes: family problem, absent of responsability in the couple .private interet.....perhapes this couples have abonded their child because they was in irregulary situation and they wanted with this behavier tor regularise their situation
ihave writen a lot of case like this situation and it happandes in canada.

my freind
the contrainst is in the solution of this problem
in the country who respect the child , they have a site to receive the child and totake care of them. but in the majority of african and arabic country until now didn't recognise the phenomen.2
they have adopted and ratified wright child convention of 1989 but in reality they don't respect child reight
a the end i want to tell tohave achild is agreat responsability to.have achis is the best givft that god we give us
so we must unterstand this responsability
thanks my freind

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Message par makhaf 23/02/08, 10:13 pm

newfinder a écrit:Firstly thank you Kabi for your response and for your suggestions .
About your suggestions ,i appreciate that .
By choosing to write this kind of articles from news paper ,i m looking to get people who are reading it informations about how Canadians think about such as problems .
For example the article of yesterday was about how the law in Canada charge people who don't take care about there children .
By this kind of articles members could know some informations about Canada
There is a big deference between Canada and our lovely Morocco . Such us the law .
Thats all for today i hope that some of the readers will appreciate that .
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Dear All,
Thank you for your efforts and your courage !
1-My special thanks to "newfinder", i really appreciate your action to post such article !
We would really feel in good terms with canadian law, but we should perform deep changes in the way we act once we get there !!
2-Thanks to "kabi" for your care 'bout the organisation aspect of our lovely forum, i just wanna say that such article is a part of the immigrant daily life !!!

Many Thanks to all of you !!!
makhaf
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Message par driss 24/02/08, 12:10 pm

real morccan are always had pleasure to help other .....you are one of them .....allah bless you.

good luke for the next and for the best
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Message par kabi 24/02/08, 10:23 pm

By this kind of articles members could know some informations about Canada


Thank you Newfinder.

Could you please share with us the reality of WORK in Toronto?

Would you mind for exemple to inform us if employers give chance to immigrant for job, or do they avoid them?
What is sector and field that are so attractive and hot in Toronto?
What is the best way for getting a job in Toronto (placements agencies, networking, job-Fair, web-sites advertisiment, etc ...)?
Do you think the moroccan networking is really efficient in Toronto?

Thanks a lot for your help

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Message par bestway 25/02/08, 11:13 am

welcom newfinder in this forum.
our target is to serve our friends in their immigration process.by sharing the informations; and the experiences.
and thanks a lot for this topic "abonding child".
this fenomina is well-spread,and also is considered to be a serious crime in many jurisdictions.


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Message par saladine 25/02/08, 01:03 pm

salam dear friends ,

Firtoff I thank all the participants in this post for their viewpoints and a special thank to Newfinder welcome

My contribution will be just to make some grammar correction in terms of lexicon or spelling ..

maybe if you don't mind to ...

Grammatically speaking , don't mind (used in questions and negatives)followed by a gerund exp : ....don't mind forwarding .


People will be more focused when all informations concerning ...

information : is an uncountable noun in English ( countable in other languages)
i.e For further information (= if you want to know more),please contact our erableatlas forum .


…like you or other persons who are living ...

person : noun [C] plural people or LAW persons
i.e A meal at the restaurant costs about $70 for two people.
LEGAL Four persons have been charged with the murder.


...there rather than to talk about somethimg choosed in newspaper.. ...

After verbal idioms would rather there is no to: i.e He likes starting early rather than staying late.
Besides , choose is a irregular verb
…about how Canadians think about such as problems . ...

The use of such as is relatively simple. It is used with a noun to introduce examples:
He likes playing sports such as tennis, football and swimming.
Therefore , about how Canadians think about such problems (without as )

The committee is thinking of raising the subscription. I would oppose such a decision. In this example In the formal style, such + noun can be used to mean 'like this / that' or 'of the kind that has just been mentioned'.

the knowledges and the experiences . ...

knowledge like information is (uncountable)


it's due on a lot of causes

due to (because of) : it's due to a lot of causes
the goal of this espace ist to chare ..........

espace (FR) : space
chare : share

please do correct me if I am mistaken , because none is perfect !
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Message par lion69 26/02/08, 09:23 am

salam thanks mr salahdine for these correction.

without copmlex personnally i find this initiative very important
i consider it that is one of the way to improveour englich language
also the gramma is very necessary to write a coorect sentence an to expres correctly.
athis occasion i remember that mr kabi ( president of erable atlas in canda) had set a post in this forum specialy for this aim in order to push our freinds to express their opinions in englich but unforntunaty this experience had not succeded .i dont' unterstand th reasons
i beleive our freind that this communication and interaction betwen us are interesssent topractice this language
i hope that this space can a help us to promote our level in this rich language.
learn englich is became a need if we want to realese a easily integration
integration is mean studies work socail relations
thanks

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